Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, no doubt that having access in the internet is highly necessarily for too many reasons. Nevertheless, the public transportation is not less important for everyday live. In my point of view, I believe the public transportation plays a significant role for all people of different age groups.
To begin, I would say the government should invest more money on public transportation rather then internet access. I support this Idea for couple reasons. First, not everyone need access to the internet. There are old people that never use internet because they do not have to, but they have to move out of their houses to go grocery shopping and because their health conditions they are not able to drive their own cars, so need to get the local bus. A good example for this is my grandmother,who is eighty seven year old and she lives in an area where there is no local bus available. So she has to ask her neighbors every time she needs to buy something from the store. If there would be bus available she would not have to bother anyone for her needs.
In addition, public transportation are always less expensive. People who need to travel for work every day are more likely to get the trains or buses rather than cars. For instance, I live in a village, but my job is in the city. That is about thirty miles away from my home, and if there was no train available I would not be able to travel by car everyday as the expenses of the fuel are so high. With the train I am paying eighty dollars each month for traveling back and forth from home to the place I work. On the other hand, to drive the car costs me three hundred dollars.That is why I like to have more public transportation available, so the people can live a better live.
Moreover, the public transportation improves people's social live. When you get the bus, you will have the chance to find someone sitting next to you and have a small talk, why not make some friends. My brother's best friend is someone he found in the bus during the time he was at school. They both took the same bus every morning to get to the same school. After couple months of sitting next to each other they became good friends, even though they were in different classes in school, even in different grades.
To sum up, I would say having internet is something fun, relaxing and it keeps you connected to the world, but having an accommodated and precise public transportation is important to live an happy, healthy and less expensive live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, as to, for instance, in addition, no doubt, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54323725055 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54742385405 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50332594235 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0184579718 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1363636364 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167271822609 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552673080363 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450336567135 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930320861945 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030890635373 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.