Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers.
Parents are the first teachers to children. Parents teach their children, share their interest with them and develop close emotional connections with them. They are important in children lives. However, they are not the best teacher to children.
Firstly, children learn many things from their parents, such as life techniques. Parents may be aware of children's ability or weakness. However, they might not have special ability to teach their children. For example, a child may ask from their parents something that their father or mother do not have any information or accurate information about it. Conversely, the child will be confused.
Secondly, our parents share their interest with us. For instance, they like to encourage their children to register to a college or university to have academic education. On the other hand, parents may persistent to children to study in a major which their child are not interested in it, so in these cases children will either make wrong decisions or got confused.
Parents develop close emotional ties with children. They may restrict children freedom for the reason of safety, For instance, a child who is a student at school may wanted to go trip with his friend and teacher. The trip might have new experience for child, but the parents may not allow his child to go which they afraid of safety. The school may wanted to camping but his parents may think it is dangerous and are concerned to child get hurt.
Parents are pivotal and important to children lives. Human in the childhood learn many thing from them, but there are problems in teaching them which make them to not to be best teachers, additionally children could learn ample thing from books, newspapers and from school teachers and so on. All of these resources are valuable to children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'they're afraid'.
Suggestion: they're afraid
...nts may not allow his child to go which they afraid of safety. The school may wanted to cam...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...ren lives. Human in the childhood learn many thing from them, but there are problems in te...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...teaching them which make them to not to be best teachers, additionally children could l...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255192878338 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.148367952522 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0712166172107 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0445103857567 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0830860534125 0.0685040099705 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0919881305638 0.118717715034 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0178041543027 0.0351676179071 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50150890988 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0504451038576 0.0309702414327 163% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.053412462908 0.0887237588012 60% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0385756676558 0.0209618222197 184% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0118694362018 0.0139019557991 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1801.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 301.0 408.028673835 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98338870432 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335548172757 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282392026578 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205980066445 0.174417080927 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12292358804 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50150890988 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478405315615 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.9721604065 59.2087087015 79% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8421052632 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4561948687 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7894736842 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 44.081307921 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.32258064516 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225204722517 0.300154397459 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115977828602 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105620447179 0.0752933317313 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530305230476 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178526764548 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101961544378 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674231409051 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.277129801704 0.336927656856 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0497318212864 0.067059652881 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157480020306 0.210909579961 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496790835228 0.0618886996521 80% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.