Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the given statement that parents are the best teacher and also not only the best but our first teacher. We learn lost of things since our birth.
Firstly, parents taught us about the social values, we all know in school and colleges we learn about the subject, but the real value of living we learn from our parents. They taught us about how to face difficulties in life, also they taught us about to differentiate things like what is good and what is bad. Also, they told us to make friends wisely and they always said that learn from mistakes and stay strong in a difficult situation. Do not get over with failure and try until you get success and also not lose the self-confidence in failure. And because they know us they give us the best advice to overcome from failure. For example, once I had got failure in the 9th standard, my parents told me this does not end they give me lots of examples and handle in my worst phase from that day I learn not to lose in failure and whatever it is to stay calm and think positive.
Additionally, most of the time we learn about lots of things unconsciously like how to behave with people, how to talk with them. For example, one thing we learn from our parents how to behave with elders and how to talk with the people who are elder than us and also how to respect them. Also how to respect the relations, we learn all small things from our parents which are not taught in school or colleges.
Hence, Yes I agree that parents are the best teacher they taught us lots of things from childhood consciously or unconsciously, that things which we are not learning in school or colleges.
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31964838081 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43606557377 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9876755261 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111061555495 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540919559369 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058922789331 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943795224871 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444367489547 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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