Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parenthood is very essential in everyone’s life. Parents always has a desire to make their child learn and grow with all the enjoyment. I totally agree that parents are the best teachers. I feel this way because of the several reasons which I have explored in the following essay.
First of all, parents give us support in every phase of life. In any stage, no matter what parents will always be a backbone to their children in good or bad times. My experience has been compelling example of it. When I was in sixth class of primary school in India, I was very weak in maths at one point. I had excellent scores in every subjects but somehow due to maths score my aggregate percentage goes down every time. I was really struggling in maths and once I had cried in maths exam which I feel embraced after getting my results. At that moment, my parents stood behind me and convinced me not to stop working hard. In addition, they showed me courage and positive attitude which I felt really confident. As a result, after many attempts and nights of hard work finally I secured 85% marks in maths. In this way, parents have always played major role in the children’s lives.
Furthermore, parents sometimes let us make mistakes in order to teach us a lesson. They encourage us to do something new but at the same time they want us to learn by ourselves. My friend has been a great example of it. My friend Andy like to do ice- skating a lot. Andy’s parents let him do any activity which he like and support him. So when he started ice skating, initially he was not confident enough and somehow he started skating on ice but the ice was so hard and if you someone would not be confident then they might fell down and end up in serious injury. Similarly, Andy fall back on the back while skating on ice and had injured his left hip which he had to rest for three months. At that point, Andy’s parents told him that he had learnt a lesson which has been good for him and he would not repeat the mistake again. Likewise, parents sometimes let us self learn.
In conclusion, I agree for sure that parents has been best teachers not only because they had be a constant support but also, sometimes they let us learn by our own having good or bad experiences. In this society, every parents should support their child constantly to become a successful individual.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'been the best'.
Suggestion: been the best
...sion, I agree for sure that parents has been best teachers not only because they had be a...
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Line 13, column 95, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...best teachers not only because they had be a constant support but also, sometimes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, likewise, really, similarly, so, then, while, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54060324826 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49255111988 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515081206497 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9305998138 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.28 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.24 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119596322993 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406782290296 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448526517658 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906285132559 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374471683657 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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