THE WELL BEING OF SOCIETY IS ENHANCED WHEN MANY OF ITS PEOPLE QUESTION AUTHORITY
Unity in variety defines our society, a well-being society is formed when every person takes responsibility. But for a lead that society we need an authorized person. Who communicates with everyone and decide on behalf of the person. Yes, the well-being of society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
When society elects the person to resolve their problem and take some decision on behalf of them. Society gives that person an authority to decide on behalf of them. And the responsibility of the authorized person is they have to fulfill the essential demand of the society. For example, we elect the leaders to convey our problems to the parliament. The one person who put the common man’s points of view in front of the higher authority.
The responsibility of society is to ask the question regarding their development. They will not take things seriously until they did not get questioned. If a common man can ignore the things then, the authorized person will also not take that thing seriously. For example, consider a scenario there is a lot of garbage on the roadside; one person who is leaving another side of the road, he complained about that garbage to the municipal office and ask them to clean that. Next they that garbage was trash. These things will not happen until we do not ask the question to authority.
To be the well-being society there is everyone is responsible for it. The development is not possible until every person is taking responsibility. To the enhanced society we also need to take a step for our development purpose. For example, we faced a water supply problem; we did not get a solution until we complained to the cooperator and tell him to do something regarding it. Somewhere there is our responsibility to take a step to ask a question.
Therefore, the well-being of society is enhanced when many of its people question authority. And also there is a common man's responsibility to take a step towards their responsibility.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
... The responsibility of society is to ask the question regarding their development. They will ...
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Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
... things will not happen until we do not ask the question to authority. To be the well-being s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89675516224 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92607228955 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410029498525 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1443599039 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.4545454545 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4090909091 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353575110466 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132483233237 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.213645129573 0.0758088955206 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269948180495 0.150359130593 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18977078069 0.0667264976115 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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