PEOPLES BEHAVIOUR IS LARGELY DETERMINED BY FORCES NOT OF THEIR OWN MAKING
The term “human behavior” is not easy to understand, everyone having different behavior. Most of the time our behavior represents our personality and upbringing.
On our planet, humans are the only spices who can think logically. Our thinking is depending upon the surrounding. Sometimes our behavior is influenced by the surrounding, and we think in that way. It is natural for us to interact with the people around us. They influenced our actions, our thoughts, and behavior. For example, our parents most of the time our actions are influenced by our parents, we do things according to them. And most of the time we decide according to our society and at that time our thinking doesn’t matter at all.
We all living in a society, where every second person is influenced, someone. And their behavior is largely determined by force, not of their own making. For example, on social media everyone seems happy but the real-life scenario is different. Today’s generation's behavior depends on what other people think, not what they want. Here everyone is living by other points of view. The human behavior automatically changed when people feel society taking them for granted. Most people do things only to get attention, maybe they don’t like to do, but still, they did this because they want to live in the spotlight. For example, Leaders who only want to live in a spotlight, when they realize people taking them for granted, they start doing things to get attention like a huge “donation” for poor peoples, maybe they don’t want to do it, but still, they did to get attention.
Moreover, Sometimes peoples highly influenced by someone, and peoples behave what the next person wants. For example, when people love someone deeply and change behavior for them, change habits and choices for them. At this point, people give the reference want the next person wants. And this is how they change their behavior for the other person.
Most of us are living under the term “fear of missing out”, and this thing forces us to do which is not what we want. For example, many people scared while watching horror movies, but we don’t want to miss that, because everyone is watching it.
Therefore, yes people's behavior is largely determined by forces, not of their own making. People do things according to their surrounding what by their own making. They influenced, they get attached and they change their behavior according to what others think or what others want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...ents our personality and upbringing. On our planet, humans are the only spice...
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s who can think logically. Our thinking is depending upon the surrounding. Sometimes our be...
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
.... It is natural for us to interact with the people around us. They influenced our actions, our thoug...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06730769231 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72126320622 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432692307692 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2329932551 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0769230769 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15187954409 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639293572153 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110102901946 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932862227431 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931192646612 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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