Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people enjoy life more than old people do.
Young people have lots of opportunities to enjoy life whereas old people had fewer opportunities at their time than young people. I feel that young people enjoy more than old people do. Change in generation with time is an important factor here because with a change in every generation life-style gets better and better. So in every generation young people will have more opportunities to enjoy their life than old people.
Young people enjoy more than old people because, young people having good health, whereas old people suffering from health problems. And that is more effective for the enjoyment of old people. For example, young people can travel at any season anywhere but on the other hand because of health problems old people cannot travel for long period at any time.
Young people having fewer responsibilities, they are stress-free so they can enjoy full of passion. However, old people have lots of responsibilities. For example, young people only have college to attend, but old people having responsibilities of their family, job and their children. For young people having enjoyment with studies can be possible but for old people having enjoyment with all responsibilities is difficult.
Young people are more curious and adventures, they are always ready to explore new things and always ready to try new things in life. Whereas, old people prefer to get comfortable with the usual things and sometimes they ignored to try new things because they are lost interest to learn new things. For example, old people are avoiding to handle new gadgets, because they think first they have to learn about that, on the other hand, young people always ready to try trending things. Also, young people always ready to take a risk and try to learn beyond the limits and experience new things, such as old people get afraid and not always take a risk.
Hence, Yes young people enjoy more than old people do and because of their curiosity, they are always ready to try new things with enjoyment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, whereas, for example, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98214285714 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5547782696 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.401785714286 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4778418863 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449735700958 0.236089414692 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225179308385 0.076458572812 295% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140207840985 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324784161121 0.150856017488 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951470890397 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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