PEOPLES BEHAVIOUR IS LARGELY DETERMINED BY FORCES NOT OF THEIR OWN MAKING
The term “human behavior” is not easy to understand, everyone having different behavior. Most of the time our behavior represents our personality and upbringing.
On our planet, humans are the only spices who have an ability to think logically. Our thinking is depending upon the surrounding. Sometimes our behavior is influenced by the surrounding, and we think in that way. It is natural for us to interact with the people around us. They influenced our actions, our thoughts, and behavior. For example, our parents most of the time our actions are influenced by our parents, we do things according to them. And most of the time we make a decision according to our society and at that time our own thinking doesn’t matter at all.
We all living in a society, where every second person is influenced, someone. And their behavior is largely determined by force, not of their own making. For example, on social media everyone seems happy but the real-life scenario is different. Today’s generation's behavior depends on what other people think, not what they want. Here everyone is living by other points of view. The human behavior automatically changed when people feel society taking them for granted. Most of the people do things only to get attention, maybe they don’t like to do, but still, they did this because they want to live in a spotlight. For example, Leaders who only want to live in a spotlight, when they realize people taking them for granted, they start doing things to get attention like a huge “donation” for poor peoples, maybe they don’t want to do it, but still, they did to get attention.
Moreover, Sometimes peoples highly influenced by someone, and peoples behave what the next person wants. For example, when people love someone deeply and change behavior for them, change habits and choices for them. At this point, people give the reference want the next person want. And this is how they change their behavior for the other person.
Most of us are living under the term “fear of missing out”, and this thing forces us to do which is not what we actually want. For example, many people scared while watching horror movies, but we don’t want to miss that, because everyone is watching it.
Therefore, yes people's behavior is largely determined by forces, not of their own making. People do things according to their surrounding what by their own making. They influenced, they get attached and they change their behavior according to what other think or what other wants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...ents our personality and upbringing. On our planet, humans are the only spice...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...bility to think logically. Our thinking is depending upon the surrounding. Sometimes our be...
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
.... It is natural for us to interact with the people around us. They influenced our actions, our thoug...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72720397523 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430588235294 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7105913878 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3846153846 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3461538462 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171283472118 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066752746133 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109414422786 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979562054198 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896015233694 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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