IN MANY FIELD OF ENDEAVOR, IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO MAKE A SIGNIFICANT CONTRIBUTION WITHOUT FIRST BEING STRONGLY INFLUENCED BY PAST ACHIEVEMENTS WITHIN THAT FIELD.
I agree with the above statement, we learn the things first and then we use it for our betterment. First being strongly influenced by past achievements within a particular field makes our confidence high and we do that thing without any hesitation.
Human being has great learning ability, we learn things continuously since from birth, from parents, teachers or by our self. We think lots of time before taking a step in any field without basic knowledge. In particular, if we want to be successful in any field then the basic knowledge is important about that field. For example, if I want to become successful businesswomen I need to have that basic knowledge about the business. The knowledge helps me to learn more things.
Firstly, I learn things in a basic manner then I can improve them with deep learning. The basic things help us to achieve success. Moreover, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field. For example, the business I started, I cannot expand it until I got a great success in it. My past achievements play a most significant contribution in the future. Past achievement helps to boast confidence; also it helps to push ourselves more. The past achievements are not only making a significant contribution but also, give strength to face different situations.
Additionally, every time we learn about our mistakes, the mistake we had done in the past; we try to avoid it in the future. Trying and keep trying is the most important way to get influenced in any field. For example, Scientists, they learn things by their mistakes, their past experiences help them to get more knowledge. Also, past small achievement helps them to step towards a big success. Moreover, we never stop to learn things and also never stop to get an over with things.
Hence, in many fields of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by the past achievements within that field. And also it helps to boast confidence and give a strength to push more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in a basic manner" with adverb for "basic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... more things. Firstly, I learn things in a basic manner then I can improve them with deep learn...
Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
...y learn things by their mistakes, their past experiences help them to get more knowledge. Also, ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95197740113 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91529392738 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435028248588 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1231332782 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.4761904762 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426582363304 0.243740707755 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159170261856 0.0831039109588 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.256265895552 0.0758088955206 338% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324611738943 0.150359130593 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.226328762603 0.0667264976115 339% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.38706741573 78% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.