Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
parents are the one who stand with their children from the very day of birth to the time they are alive. therefore, the question arises whether or not parents are suited to the role of teachers. personally, I believe that parents can teach us many skills. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, our parents can help us by giving advice to us, which will help us in making decision. The suggestions given by our elders can sometimes make easy in reaching a resolution of the problem. For instance, about three years ago, when I was in college I had a girlfriend. As a result, I spent most of the time with her without focusing on my studies. However, soon I became concerned about my studies and wanted to stop meeting with my girlfriend but I could not let her go easily. therefore, I shared my problem with my father who provided me with an excellent advice, which made me handle both the situations with brilliance. if I had not taken advice from me father, I would have miserably failed in handling in one of the situations.
Secondly, parents are our best guide, who stand and support us no matter what the situation comes. A child can blindly rely on their parents if he is stuck in a difficulty and facing ignorance from the world. His parents would always be there to support him and motivate him to face the world and take a lead over them. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. about seven years ago, when I was studying in school I got failed in my seventh standard, though I studied hard. As a result, I was humiliated by the society as they repeatedly called me a "failure" and even my friends teased me. At such tough time, only my parents were there to support me and to exhort me that I am not a failure and I can do much more better than this performance. Eventually, due to their constant support I was able to face the society and be the top scorer of seventh standard the very next year. Hence, parents are the best teachers as they aid and guide us.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that parents are very well apt in their role of teachers. this is because their advice make easy for their child to resolve difficulty in life and because they are the one whom a child can blindly trust and together with them face the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4686774942 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53968242326 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510440835267 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2946540467 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5454545455 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5909090909 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77272727273 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146485538851 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462285870665 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337620495498 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923553272737 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294366896377 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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