The people we work with have many different characteristics and all of them affect the quality of our time at work. Of the following, what do you think is the most important quality for a boss or supervisor to have?
-a serious attitude about their work
-a lot of related experience
-a tendency to always tell the truth
The pooling of human resources to complete the work efficiently has become commonplace now. However, the question arises about what quality should the team leader possess in order to lead the team. personally, I believe the leader should be an experienced person. I believe this for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, an urbane boss will be able to tackle many problems, which can make working on the project smoother. The supervisor will be always be there to handle any obstruction while doing work so, that the process is not halted. For instance, in the company which I work, I was recently assigned with a group project where the team lead was 10 years senior than me. The presence of him in the team made everyone confident that we will somehow be able to complete the project. As a result, whenever anyone get stuck in any problem he quickly resolve the issues without causing major delays, thus boosting the morale of the team members to persist their difficulties and telling them he is every time there to help. Eventually, we were able to give the project on time. If the team leader had not been well-educated, we would have failed to submit the project on time.
Secondly, a well knowledgeable team lead will help the members by educating them, which is beneficial for the teammates. The knowledge which the supervisor had earned by working for many years will definitely help the team members to learn some tactics and efficiently perform their tasks and handle difficult situations with aplomb. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. about two years ago, when I was a fresher in the company, I had to go through probation period. this made me work under senior manager who taught me many skills which I may have gathered only by working for many years. The tactics he taught me till date comes to my rescue and had made me escape many difficult situations. Therefore, a well-educated boss can educate teammates to learn some tricks.
In conclusion I strongly believe that a an experienced leader is a must in an organization or in a team. this is because he being gone through the phases already, is in a better situation to guide the team members and because he can disseminate his knowledge to his team members which can be beneficial for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79652605459 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64184448404 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508684863524 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0039794302 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.65 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.15 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200080854653 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608974682594 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529369668431 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115187011831 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613816678335 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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