People have a lot of opinions about the value of advanced education. Which do you think is the most important reason to attend college or university? Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
1. new experiences, 2. career preparation, 3. increased knowledge.
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
All students have a dream of studying in a particular university however, their motives of studying in an institution can differ. In my opinion, the single most important reason for joining university is for career preparation. I feel this way for 2 reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, one cannot get hired just by completing the school level of education. college provides the adequate skills and shape the student to get a job when he graduate and survive in the corporate world. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. when I completed my school, I was in a haste to earn money and fulfill my wishes and don't want to study anymore. Although, soon I came to know that I will not get a job as I am not an graduate, who has a college degree. As a result, I was forced to study again to get a job. In the university, therefore I came to know about what skills I was lacking and how can I improve myself. Eventually, when I graduated I had a job in my hand. therefore, university is a necessity for career development.
Secondly, networking is the another reason which we learn and make in the college. however, the results of networking are not immediate but are surely beneficial in the long run. we make friends in the college and when they graduated and get placed in various company then the benefit of networking starts: the power of referral program. For instance, my brother when I graduated from college was able to land a good job in his hand. Unfortunately, the company where he was placed faced vicissitudes and he was expelled. Now, being unemployed he contacted his college friends who referred him into their company for interview. Consequently, he was able to get a job easily and escaped the face of hardships. If he would not have been to college, he would not be able to make such strong networks which can help him in hard phases of life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe the going to college has one and only main factor and that is career making. this is because universities help in developing skills and providing the opportunity so, that student can get a job and because by attending the institution one makes strong networks which indirectly helps the career in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as for, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66334164589 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77830557123 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488778054863 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0444755936 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2272727273 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128084083292 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402053721202 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521690605885 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920271876477 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489077258646 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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