Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which do you agree with?
There is no doubt that nowadays internet is an inevitable part of humankind's life. The internet makes many tasks easier for humankind to perform. This brings up a controversial topic whether the internet gives us worthwhile information or it only creates problems for human-being. In my perspective, I strongly believe that the internet does not produce problems, rather it is a good tool to gain a wealth of information. The reasons behind this viewpoint are discussed in the following paragraphs.
The first reason that immediately comes to mind is that the internet provides information regarding everyday events. In fact, there are many news websites such as BBC or CNN, which inform people about occurrences that happen around the world. People can easily search on the internet and get information about the catastrophe that has been taken place in the nearby country. For instance, I found authentic and comprehensive data related to the disastrous earthquake in my neighbor country from the internet. This information was valuable because our country observed that our nearby country needs monetary support and thus we send them monetary aids in order to allow them to deal with the unpredictable event. Therefore, one of the benefits of the internet access is most up-to-date data about events happening around the globe.
The second point worth discussing is that the internet supplies valuable information surrounding academic subjects. Indeed, when scientists want to do a research about topics in their field of interest, they could use the internet in order to locate an article by merely looking on the journal websites. For example, my brother is a researcher and he needs to look at several articles in order to write paper. He always write keywords on the journal websites and read the introduction section of the articles at home. However, without internet access, he used to go to library which is a far from his home and time-consuming. All the aforementioned information are available only on the internet. Hence, the internet is beneficial for scholars and researchers.
Last but not the least, the internet helps students to study well. Young adults always have problems in their studies including difficulty in taking notes. When these students could not take effective note at classes, they could not study at home or even they forget essential points. However, the internet solves students ‘problems regarding school. For instance, while I was serving on the internet, I observed a weblog which was about the best method for taking note. This weblogs was really helpful for my education, since the weblogs makes it easier for me to take note at lecture rooms by suggesting to write abbreviation of words. As a result this information, I am able not only take good notes from class discussion, but also can easily review them at home. Consequently, another advantage of access to the internet is to provide assistance for students in their education.
In conclusion, according to above-mentioned factors, I contend that the internet gives a tremendous amount of information for people including children and adults. This information is worthwhile for people because it informs about day-to-day events and helps scientists as well as students.
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Suggestion: suggesting writing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, really, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2754.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23574144487 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92078326116 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519011406844 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 854.1 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5179603891 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194749143373 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539948016817 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039064083489 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115303441188 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414765891113 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.