Essay topics: TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that today' world complexity poses several changes at universities. The social and sport pursuits are of the paramount importance for adults. This brings up a controversial question surrounding these practices: Should college allocate same amount of money for social and sport pursuits? In my perspective, I agree with the stance that university must dedicate equal financial support for sport and social activities. The reasons for my viewpoint are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, social activities are beneficial for students’ future career. In fact, in the modern society, a lot of companies and employers ask from their job candidates to have a good communicational skill. Even these firms value communication by dedicate money for training their employees in order to communicate effectively with their customers, thus it is significant to have social competency. Additionally, communication skill allow people to pursue jobs that required high level of communication competence. For instance, some profession such as marketing involves in interacting with people for the sake of introducing product and persuading potential consumers to buy their products. If someone are skillful in communication with other people, s/he definitely will be able to work as a marker and as a result of this, s/he will become successful in his or her career. Hence, one of benefits of providing financial support for performing social activities is related to students' future profession and universities should give equal money to social activities.
The second reason that support my standpoint is that sport activities are good for people's health. Indeed, medical scientists currently convince people to dedicate time every day for executing physical activities. They believes that by performing physical tasks such as aerobic exercises, individuals decrease the possibility of getting heart diseases, as these exercises increase the stream of blood in the body and thereby strengthen heart muscles. Not only that, but also exercises are important to curing the people' mental problems. In fact, there is an agreement among medical scientist that sport practices helps to treat mental and emotional ailments including depression and alzaimor. So, as you can see, physical activities are as significant as other classes at colleges, because individuals are healthful when they start to do them.
The last but not least, students by attending in social and sport practices will become more involved in the studying. By participating at the aforementioned practices, students could talk with their classmates or other students from another department when they go to student's club. In these clubs, they make new friends and so that they can spend time for carrying out leisure activities such as going to cinema or eating food at a restaurants. All of these tasks cause to student to refresh mood. Consequently, they will entail in class material well, which universities should spend same amount of money for students' social and sport practices.
In conclusion, according to above-mentioned factors, I contend that university should supply monetary aids for students' sports and social tasks, because the advantages of doing so are finding job in the future as well as being healthy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 712, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...umers to buy their products. If someone are skillful in communication with other pe...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
...for executing physical activities. They believes that by performing physical tasks such ...
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Line 4, column 432, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a restaurant' or simply 'restaurants'?
Suggestion: a restaurant; restaurants
...ch as going to cinema or eating food at a restaurants. All of these tasks cause to student to...
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Line 4, column 649, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or students social and sport practices. In conclusion, according to above-mentio...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the future as well as being healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, second, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2809.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.486328125 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02832834291 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5390625 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 865.8 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2328474079 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.041666667 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70833333333 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194402577342 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615664427576 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615028442017 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114310627184 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434808759694 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 86.8835125448 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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