Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is often argued that whether it is good to spend equal money on sports and social activities as on classes and libraries. It is not easy to agree or disagree with the statement without considering strong reasons for the choice. Many people claim that only classes and libraries should be given preference, while, others may belief otherwise. I personally agree with the statement that sports and social activities should be given importance and financial support as given to classes and libraries. Subsequent paragraphs will expound the reasons that why I think so.
First of all, sports and social activities has many advantages which cannot be neglected in comparison to others. Sports keep students fit, both physically and mentally and student feel fresh. When students stay healthy, their focus in studies will increase ans eventually their performance in studies will enhance. Moreover, their involvement in social activities will rise self-confidence in them which is necessary to lead a company in future. For instance, one of my friends always participated in different activities of university. He was a champion in football and also organize many workshops and seminars on different emerging issues of society. As, a result he developed many abilities in himself. On job interview he was very confident and get job in his first interview. Later, he get two promotions in just one year due to his self-confidence and leadership qualities.
Secondly, while participating in sports student may get its future directions. He may choose his career in sports. If university provides him good facilities then he can emerge as a champion and can be selected in national or international teams. This will increase the reputation of the university or college manifolds. That student will be the pride for his country. Furthermore, after this achievement many donors will also donate funds to ameliorate the financial conditions of the institute. For example, Shahid is a best player of our country. He get his education from a private college. That college provide him all opportunities in supports and social activities and he became a world renowned player. Now, every student want to get admission in that college and institute never face financial challenges due to many donors to support this institute.
To conclude, students should be provided with all kind of ailments. They should be provided with best possible facilities of sports and social activities by spending equal amount on them as on classes and libraries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e given importance and financial support as given to classes and libraries. Subse...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...em which is necessary to lead a company in future. For instance, one of my friends always...
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...n different emerging issues of society. As, a result he developed many abilities i...
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Suggestion: the
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Suggestion: gets
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
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...nd of ailments. They should be provided with best possible facilities of sports and socia...
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Suggestion:
...nt on them as on classes and libraries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28395061728 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9438229538 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516049382716 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.644688451 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3076923077 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5769230769 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26923076923 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226059012676 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596321802342 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077639663801 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161182745693 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106060705163 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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