Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is often argued that whether it is good to spend equal money on sports and social activities as on classes and libraries. It is not easy to agree or disagree with the statement without considering strong reasons for the choice. Many people claim that only classes and libraries should be given preference, whlie, others may belief otherwise. I personally, agree with the statement that sports and social activities should be given importance and financial support as given to classes and libraraies. Subsequent paragraphs will expound the reasons that why I think so.
First of all, sports and social activities has many advantages which cannot be neglected in comparison to others. Sports keep students fit, both physically and mentally and student feel fresh. When students remain healthy, their focus in studies will increase ans eventually their performance in studies will enhance. Moreover, their involvement in social activities will rise self-confidence in them which is necessary to lead a company in future. For instance, one of my friends always participated in different activites of university. He was a champion in football and also organize many workshops and seminars on different emerging issues of society. As, a result he developed many abilitites in himself. On job interview he was very confident and get job in his first interview. Later, he get two promotions in just one year due to his self-confidence and leadership qualities.
Secondly, while participating in sports student may get its future directions. He may choose his career in sports. If university provides him good facilities then he can emerge as a champion and can be selected in national or international teams. This will increase the reputation of the university or college manifolds. That studnet will be thr pride for his country. Furthermore, after this achievment many donars will also donate funds to ameliorate the financial conditions of the institute. For example, Shahid Afridi is a best player of our country. He get his education from a private college. That college provide him all opportunities in supports and social activites and he became a world renowned player. Now, every student want to get admission in that college and institute never face financial challenges due to many donars to support this institute.
To conclude, students should be provided with all kind of ailments. They should be provided with best possible facilities of sports and social activities by spending equal amount on them as on classes and libraraies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 5.04856512141 337% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 7.30242825607 301% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1373.03311258 157% => OK
No of words: 406.0 270.72406181 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29310344828 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94526186423 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 145.348785872 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527093596059 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 419.366225166 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 13.0662251656 199% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4819651 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6538461538 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26923076923 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221506461945 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573101793151 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776915027882 0.0662205650399 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158694415767 0.162205337803 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111046856441 0.0443174109184 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 63.6247240618 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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