TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that people need a way to be aware of every day episodes. News is of paramount role in humankind' life. This brings us an arguable question that is concerned with making a use of news source: Does a person should acquire information from many places in order to be well-informed? Some people are inclined toward sticking on one news resource, whereas others disagree. As far as I'm concerned, I prefer to use wide variety of newspapers, magazine and so forth. The reasons behind this standpoint are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, people can gain various information related to different topics. In fact, someone could earn knowledge regarding to sport from sources such as Television news or newspaper's sport section. Domestic sport news merely may be find from local newspapers, however, if a person is interested in World Cup competitions or foreign countries sports practices, s/he should watch International news channels including BBC and CNN. Additionally, individuals could extend their knowledge related to medicine and health from educational magazines and health newspapers, while all of these information cannot written in just one source for example a newspaper or Television news, because Television news and newspaper always inform us about critical subjects or new things that are interesting for public. Therefore, earing information concerning diverse topics and subject only can be investigated in different sources of news.
The second reason why I am interested in getting information from various resources is that people will be able to find accurate and authentic news from them. Nowadays, there are a huge amount of events broadcasted in the different way including television news programs, social media and Internet websites. Some of these resources may not have precise data and thus may misinform people. Information provided at Internet may sometimes is good choice unless data and news prepared from authentic and genius resources. For example, news from social media such as Telegrams or Facebook may not be true, since they have not been written by a well-informed individual. Moreover, Television programs sometime are not objective, which may give us information that are biased. For instance, in my country a reporter from national agency distributes wrong news in a TV channel from national agency and the information given in the program was not impartial, however, I obtain the exact news from other International news program. Hence, by watching and looking at diverse news, it is likely that people will get accurate and precise data.
In conclusion, according to above-mentioned reasons, I would say that it is better to a person to get information from many different sources rather than from limited one, because people not only can obtain accurate knowledge, but also various sources cover more diversified areas. How do you believe in a television news programs, when they wrongly inform you?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2511.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31991525424 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90589547134 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548728813559 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1967611972 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4761904762 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263726894938 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813196670276 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540827295387 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172504405788 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203668420702 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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