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do you agree or disagree with the following statement ( parents are the best teachers. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay topics: do you agree or disagree with the following statement ( parents are the best teachers. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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there is no doubt that children gets most of there knowledge since birth from their guardians whether they are their parents, foster parents or even a legal guardians. I have a strong belief that life is the best teacher and disagree to the statement that said we learnt everything from our parents.

First and foremost, life have many horizons and loaded with lesson that could be learnt by experience of the ones who confronted difficulties and draw their bath , or from those who attached to people who were sufferers and get the strength to tackle their own. Experiences affects people even if they were good or catastrophic ones. my mother is a good example to mention here. She rose with an illetrate mother and father in an early age. They did not get any education and they rose their daughter depending on their limited knowledge. The knowledge they got from their grand grand parents. My mother now is an english proffesor at college, she always told her story to motivate her students in the class. she was the best among her beers in the school despite the envitonment she was living in.

Secondly, not everyone has parents in their early life to teach them and provide them with knowledge. Life is not always gives this previlige. Some lost their parents or may be being abundant in foster homes.
I will mention my cousin here, for instant. he lost his parents when he was three years old in a car accident. He was not in an age to realize the lose of his parents. he rose in his aunts house. She was a mother of five, and she was parely giving him the attention as she did for her own. He decided to take care of himself at school. He studied very hard to prove himself based on the experiences he faced and what he was able to learnt from school. Books were his number one teaches in life. He becomes a writer later on.

To be concluded, parents are not always the first sparkle of knowledge nor the best teachers. Their kindness and, may be
their sense of protection made them so preserved and constraint on what information they will provide for their little ones and what values to ingress in them. Life is much bigger and harsher that it showes the good and bad without any restrictions and gives an open choice so we will decide. Are we going to take the risk to learn? So, life in its nacked truth is the best teacher and totur for everyone .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there is no doubt that children gets most of ...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'guardian'?
Suggestion: guardian
...parents, foster parents or even a legal guardians. I have a strong belief that life is th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...fronted difficulties and draw their bath , or from those who attached to people wh...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...if they were good or catastrophic ones. my mother is a good example to mention her...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mention here. She rose with an illetrate mother and father in an early age. They ...
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: grand
...edge. The knowledge they got from their grand grand parents. My mother now is an english pr...
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Line 3, column 711, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... to motivate her students in the class. she was the best among her beers in the sch...
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Line 6, column 44, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ll mention my cousin here, for instant. he lost his parents when he was three year...
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Line 6, column 143, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...cident. He was not in an age to realize the lose of his parents. he rose in his aunts ho...
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Line 6, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...age to realize the lose of his parents. he rose in his aunts house. She was a moth...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in life. He becomes a writer later on. To be concluded, parents are not always ...
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Line 9, column 406, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the best teacher and totur for everyone .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52325581395 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31714581709 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509302325581 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9921960246 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.037037037 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9259259259 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7037037037 5.45110844103 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0705109266249 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216700499236 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339007772468 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051028066404 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335568621287 0.0645574589148 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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