Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Children’s education is considered to be one of the most challenge tasks among parents. Many parents see that they are not involved with their kid’s education. However, as far as I am concerned, I believe that nowadays, parents are almost involved in every educational activity with their kids more than parents did in the past.
In the past, parents were not educated like today’s parents. Previously, parents could not understand their kids' school materials, so they were not involved with children school staff. On the other hand, now, parents are educated, and their minimum education level is high school. Therefore, they would know at least the school material that their kids studied. In addition, they try to teach their kids the things that they took during school. That is why now parents are more involved than parents from the past.
Currently, school and work have both the same time. Parents and kids go to school and work at the same time and they come home at the same time too. Thus, parents can have enough time teaching their children the school material that they took during school. For example, now, most jobs start around 8 a.m. and finish around 4 p.m. Likewise, schools start and finish around the same time. Although, older generations, parents were used working for more hours such as 12 hours shift, and the school used to finish around 1 p.m. So, there were some time differences between kids and parents, so parents did not have enough time to set with their kids and help them with school materials.
Nowadays, some schools require parent’s involvement with their kid’s school subjects. As an example, several schools around the country ask their students to do their homework with their parents. One of their famous homework is “Draw with your Parents”. This homework focuses on involving the parents in kid’s education which would enhance the connection between kids and their parents. Indeed, these days parents are much embraced with childhood education.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that parents are more involved with children’s education compared with the past. I believe it in this way because now, parents are educated, are required by the school to work with their kids, and they have the same working time with school.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, so, therefore, thus, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15343915344 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54471503159 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439153439153 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7437870776 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7619047619 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331303352925 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152583214136 0.076458572812 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104661272748 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254617944622 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779976635749 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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