Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, it is accepted that the parents pay a lot of attention for their kids' education. however, there are those who dismiss this statement. I, to a great extent, agree with the first group of people in accordance with following reasons. In my point of view, parents spent more money, time and energy for their children than in the past.
The first and foremost reason is that parents spend a great deal of finance for their kids when he they put the first feet on the word until they are able to follow them. Todays, there are several kindergartens for the newborns, divers schools for teenagers and a variety of colleges and universities for the young. this result that parents pursue their kids’ educations during their lifetimes and spend a great amount of money. If I want to say an example in this respect, I can easily say about my countries about how high school students can enter to universities. In this respect, parents spend a lot of money so that children can pass the university entrance exam so that they can go to top universities in this countries.
The second reason which should be taken into consideration is that they spend a lot of time for children's educations as far as they can help or teach them. Nowadays, most of children’s homework is carried out by their parents not the children. In this respect we cannot say that whether parents help them or cause them to be so lazy. however, whatever we can conclude is that they spent their time to improve and thrive the condition of their children educationally.
The last reason is that they spend a great amount of energy to improve their children's education. I would like say an example from myself. when I was a child, my father and my mother always told me to study hard until I could be a significant person in the future for society. however, they did not spend any energy expect advising, whereas, nowadays, parents follow their children from morning until night so that they learn a useful thing in academic environments.
In short, all the mentioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that with the passage of time parents get stock with children's education more and more. whether this statement is useful for them, is a challenging issue among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, whereas, in short, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76785714286 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60331976372 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492346938776 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0148064798 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3684210526 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259027176888 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928476450762 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736860703642 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176463820614 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602608659108 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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