Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in this progressive and sophisticated world where we live, the decision making of youngsters is one of the essential works, which have an enormous effect on their adult life. Personally, I believe that juveniles nowadays make decisions properly by standing on their own feet. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, thanks to the improvement of teaching and education methods, young people have ample information about various issues. Juveniles can make fantastic decisions in the critical times of their life by relying on their sufficient knowledge, which they have learned in school-time. Furthermore, if they do not have any information about something, they can surf the net or consult with a professional to handle their problems. My personal experience is a compelling example in this regard. About eight years ago, I wanted to decide in which field I want to continue studying at the university. In the first step, I sorted my fields of interest that I had noticed in high school. In the next level, I consulted with a professional person in this regard. As a consequence, I have applied for civil engineering. Now, I am one of the best students in my university, which I owe it all to my wise decision.
Second, nowadays, young people want to have more freedom in comparison with the past, so they want to rely on themselves, not on their fathers and mothers. Actually, it is vital that a pleasant and comfortable atmosphere must be provided in which juveniles independently can make essential decisions. In addition, scientists have found that if youngsters feel they are free in decision making, they will be self-esteemed and self-assured in the future. However, in critical and crucial occasions in which they cannot make wise decisions, and it jeopardizes their adult life, parents must help them.
In conclusion, I opine that juveniles nowadays independently make various decisions in essential situations. This is because they are more knowledgeable now, and they want to have more freedom.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0988372093 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00444590117 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531976744186 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8836901287 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226191181764 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070154621713 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057624545798 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140756452456 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447971794509 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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