Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
The way and style that people wear their clothes is one of the important things that show characteristics of them. It is possible that some people behave differently when they clothe different clothes, but also you can see some people in different clothes without any changing in their behavior. In my view, generally clothes have influence on behavior of people for two important reasons.
The main reason is that people look differently when they change their clothes. When you wear wear different clothes, you think that people watch you differently, and so you change your behavior. My brothers experience is a compelling example of this. He took a trip last year to Turkey for fun and he had forgotten bring comfortable clothes to wear during his trip. So he had to wear suit that he had wore. He says that during a week that he was in Istanbul he wasn’t comfortable and he hadn’t fun because he thought that people was watching him as business man not a tourist ans so he conformed his behavior.
Another reason is that you wear clothes based on work that you do. People wear different clothes when they are in different situations. For example when you want go to gym you wear sport clothes and when you work in an office or you are in a meeting your suit is mandatory. I remember that when I was working for an export/import company, I attended a formal meeting that all men were in suit but on of them had wore casual clothes. I remember that during the meeting he was uncomfortable and full of stress because he was distinct in meeting room. This example shows that we have to wear suitable clothes for different situations.
In conclusion, though some people think that type of clothes don’t influence the behavior of them, I strongly oppose this idea because people look you differently when you wear different clothes and also you have to wear suitable clothes based on your working condition. Finally I can say that we have to be meticulous about our clothes because It has influence on your confident and can change the attitude of people to you.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: wear
...hen they change their clothes. When you wear wear different clothes, you think that peopl...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'worn'.
Suggestion: worn
...rip. So he had to wear suit that he had wore. He says that during a week that he was...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'worn'.
Suggestion: worn
...all men were in suit but on of them had wore casual clothes. I remember that during ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...lothes based on your working condition. Finally I can say that we have to be meticulous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73553719008 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64429520403 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421487603306 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0024924698 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.117647059 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404775760524 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167200731616 0.076458572812 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137864060411 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291471366217 0.150856017488 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628634356692 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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