Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.”
Although traveling in our own country has a lot of advantages, I believe we benefit more from traveling abroad. Among many reasons why I hold this opinion, three stand out and will be discussed later in this essay.
The most important reason that is worth mentioning is that traveling overseas makes us familiar with other country’s cultures, tradition and civilization. By visiting historical places, museums, old architectures, etc. we can earn valuable information about other country’s civilization which may not be earned by reading any book or article. If we want to understand about different cultures, direct communication is the best way. The more you communicate with other nations, the more you know about their culture.
In addition to getting familiar with other cultures, as a tourist, traveling abroad is an exciting experience. We can visit nice places of other countries, for instance if you go to France for vacation one of the most important activities is going on top of the Eifel tower. Visiting museums, go sightseeing, taking tour of different cities and shopping are other popular actions for tourists. Trying traditional foods can be the most challenging aspect of traveling abroad specially in Asian countries like china which has the strangest foods in the world.
The last reason why I think traveling to other countries is more useful than traveling in our country is that it can be a good experience that may change our perspectives in our lives. Science, technology, sports, arts, political systems, freedom and many other things can be different from one country to another. For instance, to see progressed technology of western countries can be inspiring for a traveler from a third world country like Iran. For example, for a civil engineer from Iran seeing modern building industry of the USA may be a rewarding experience which may change his/her point of view about civil engineering field, that it may result in deciding to migrate abroad either to continue his or her education or to live in such an advanced piece of the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: stands
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, third, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12647058824 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89085630446 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561764705882 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8295356269 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244168882883 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882405851294 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864210375973 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153625727438 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426457715549 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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