Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People communicate with each other less than in the past because of the popularity of television Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People communicate with each other less than in the past because of the popularity of television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Some people state that today there are many option of communication than in the past. Others, however, think otherwise. They believe that people in the past used to dialogue more than today. In my opinion, nowadays people communicate more than they used to do in the past according to the following reasons to be explained in this article.
First of all, today there are many ways of communication then, it is easier for talking. People use Whats App, twitter and other ways to speak to each other. For example, in the 90's we did not have mobile phone, therefore, the merely way to talk was through face to face. Thus, this instance illustrates the lack of communication made by us with our friends.
Moreover, in the past there were no computers and we did not have social network. For instance, currently there are hundreds of social midia and people have been able to stay all day long with friends and family while there are homesick. Therefore, this shows the play of computers in our social lives.
Furthermore, in the 80's there were only television but, we were not stuck by it. As one example, I would had much more to be among friends on street than stay tune at home. Besides, I spent almost the entire day playing with them. Then, this another example shows us that TV did not make me to be at home for long hours.
Finally, I strongly believe that we communicate more nowadays than in the past not because of the television but because of mobile phones and computers and, also, because in the past we used to hang out more with friends.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'many options'.
Suggestion: many options
Some people state that today there are many option of communication than in the past. Othe...
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Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...n, it is easier for talking. People use Whats App, twitter and other ways to speak to...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ot stuck by it. As one example, I would had much more to be among friends on street...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58633093525 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4069586893 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528776978417 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9530555678 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6875 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274608882402 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840895745476 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805770060515 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148017728442 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793765992778 0.0645574589148 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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