Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People communicate with each other less than in the past because of the popularity of television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Everyone has a busy schedule; people don’t have a single second. They think that chit-chatting with others is total junk. In my opinion, I completely agree that because of the popularity of television people communicate with each other less than in the past, which I will explain in the following essay.
Firstly, nowadays technology is so advanced, that the person can watch television anytime and anywhere. Technologies like Hotstar, Netflix, Jio-tv, etc. are becoming so popular because they have those channels and movies which were available on television in the past. People usually love to spend their free time with these kinds of technologies. They think that chit-chatting with other people is a total waste; rather than gossiping it’s better to complete the movies or start the new one.
Secondly, as in the past, there were limited channels and limited serials or movies, which were generally broadcast on weekdays. So, people have the whole weekend to discuss what happened and what is going to happen next. According to me, that is the best time when people have to wait for the whole weekend, they are curious to know what’s next.
In conclusion, with the popularity of television, the communication gap emerged among the families and friends and it can be enhanced by discussing the content with the family, and friends which somehow reduces the communication gap.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 436, Rule ID: IT_IS[21]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...is a total waste; rather than gossiping it’s better to complete the movies or start ...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...pened and what is going to happen next. According to me, that is the best time when people have...
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Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... somehow reduces the communication gap.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1592920354 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70081188502 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5902660931 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294153020493 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10225025748 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125321367021 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188747597465 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133276633113 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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