Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “It is better to be a follower than a leader.”
Everyone wants to be a leader. To become a good leader, the person has to be a good follower first. A Leader is someone, who has enough capabilities and skills to lead the team, or any group. In my opinion, it is better to be a leader than to be a follower. I feel this way which, I will mention in the following essay.
Firstly, the word leader means the person who can lead, and inspire the people with their actions, and words. A Leader not only encourages the people but also helps the organization to shine. For instance, a team is working on a science project for a competition and all of the team members are inexperienced except one person who is the leader of the team, that person has the required skills and experience. A leader not only helped the team to complete the milestone but also encourages, and inspires them to win.
Secondly, a leader is always a student because a leader never stops learning. A leader is always eager to learn new techniques and technology and this eagerness makes the person an inspiring leader. One of the famous inspiring leaders is “Elon Musk”. He never stops learning, and he is always eager to invent new techniques to achieve milestones which makes him an inspiring leader.
In conclusion, it is better to be a leader because leaders are the first person who invents things, try them first and then people follow them. Leaders are pioneers, they make inventions, learn to form them, improve them and grow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 267, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...a science project for a competition and all of the team members are inexperienced except o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64864864865 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60023632811 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501930501931 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.694393233 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2666666667 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239054049492 0.272083759551 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998683477102 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076420500655 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162721607538 0.162205337803 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100385192945 0.0443174109184 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.3589403974 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.2367328918 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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