Your friend has decided to switch careers but isn’t sure which to choose. What advice would you give them? Provide reasons and examples to support your response
Every individual has their own requirements. Some might choose the high salary and some might choose the loving job. Which career option to choose varies from person to person. If I had to advise my friend then, I urge him to choose that option for which he has the zeal and can learn more without being bored. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will mention in the following essay.
Firstly, choosing a good career option is the most strenuous task. Some would prefer to choose a high salary over a loving job, but I think, the salary is not an important factor for our age. It is the time to gain knowledge as maximum as possible. With the advent of new technologies, Machine learning and Artificial intelligence play an imperative role in information and technologies. One of my friends devoted himself to the field of machine learning, when people hardly know about it, initially the pay scale was not as expected, but he keeps on learning new skills and technologies because he finds it fascinating working in that field makes him happy. So, he stuck to it and now he works as a data scientist in a reputed firm with a good pay scale.
Secondly, growth is essential for everyone. The wrong career option can lead to a halt in the growth of an individual. It’s imperative for an individual to explore different career options as much as possible which not only makes the person wise but also reduces the mental pressure.
So, I recommend to my friend that, the decision to switch the career is the best thing. This decision will not only make him happy but also helps him to grow mentally as well as financially. Which course to choose, explore it, try it, If it’s not feel good then be fearless to switch it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y and some might choose the loving job. Which career option to choose varies from per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, i feel, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58199356913 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51617116618 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546623794212 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9892338364 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8235294118 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118935199629 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398649639333 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378915733788 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751859611696 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287551081164 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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