Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Roads and highways correlated with transport. If roads and highways are not well maintained then improving public transport facilities wouldn’t be much effective. Some people believe that the government should spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways). In my opinion, it is imperative to spend money on roads and highways. I feel this way for two main reasons which, I will mention in the following essay.
Firstly, highways mean the person can travel without any hindrance, but if roads and highways are not well maintained then, it will cause massive traffic jams. For instance, if a person is heading towards the office 1 hour before office time, he is having two options the shortest, and the longest path. The first one goes from the city roads and the latter one goes from the highway. The person chooses the longest one because he doesn’t want to stick in jams or any other obstacle. But on the way, the person finds highway condition is poor, which causes the massive traffic jam, and due to which the person not able to reach on time.
Secondly, if roads and highways are not improved then it can lead to major accidents. Night-time driving is the most difficult task because of a lack of vision. At night it is very difficult to make judgments about the pit depth, how deep it is, and if it's too deep then the chances of an accident upsurge.
In conclusion, it is indispensable to spend more on the improvement of roads and highways than on improving public transportation. If the roads and highways are not improved then public transport is useless.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84306569343 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63900917751 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543795620438 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1831667475 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4666666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309037837845 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118610774029 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129551620841 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221252762743 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176082051596 0.0645574589148 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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