Some would say it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to have a job with a high salary. Do you feel this is true or not true? Explain your thoughts using examples.”
Everyone is familiar with the famous quote “Money cannot buy happiness”. High salary job or enjoyable job, the choice varies accordingly to the situation of the person. I believe that having an enjoyable job is much better than a high-salary job. I believe this way which, I will mention in the following essay.
As mentioned above, money cannot buy happiness, it directly means that the person could save million dollars but can never buy happiness. For example, a person have two job offers, one with a low salary but the work is enjoyable, and the other one with a high salary, but having a monotonous work. There are two different situations, but the latter one has a disadvantage which is that there is no personal and mental growth, and even the curiosity to learn new things also be vanished.
Job decides the future, success can only be achieved if the person works with great concentration and interest. A new invention and research are only possible, if the person works with great concentration, and focus. On the other hand, if the person indulges with zero personal interest then, it not only leads to great disappointment but also zero percent mental growth.
Financial growth in a high-salary job is extenuating, but if the person in the job, he/she enjoys it, financial growth might be slow but it’s prolonged.
In conclusion, if a person wants prolonged success then, it’s very important to have an enjoyable job than a high-salary job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...rectly means that the person could save million dollars but can never buy happiness. Fo...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ith great concentration and interest. A new invention and research are only possible, if the ...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "wants prolonged" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'prolonging' or 'to be prolonged'.
Suggestion: prolonging; to be prolonged
...nged. In conclusion, if a person wants prolonged success then, it’s very important to ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 247.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94331983806 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78636647307 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546558704453 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2771154106 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269982223119 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124502375602 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130517397464 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1943392339 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114241432787 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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