Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
The roads and highways are equally important as public transportation. In my opinion the government should spend more money on improving roads and highways. There are several reasons why I choose roads and highways.
First, there is no point in spending money on public transportation unless the roads are damaged. If the government put money in public transportation and bought new buses and trains for people then the maintenance will be increased because of rough roads. In my town the government started new buses connecting with big cities around it. After a year the buses went to the workshop for repair work because of rough roads.
Second, the bumpy and cranky roads and highways are major reasons for accidents. Nowadays so many people prefer to travel with their own vehicle so the impairment of roads and highways is more important than public transportation. In the USA the speed limit is too high on highways so the transportation department always takes care of the maintenance of highways and roads.
Third,it is difficult to walk on rugged roads in rainy seasons and waters splashed from pits on roads because of vehicles on pedestrian. The pedestrian may have slipped on a rocky road and got major injuries. I had an accident when I was in school. I was crossing the road and there was water blockage on the road and my foot got dis-balanced. I got a fracture in my right leg and I lost my final exams. To prevent people from damage the government should spend more money on roads and highways.
Finally, smooth and safe roads save lives as well as the time of people. However public transportation are also important for the public but first the government makes sure roads are fit then spend on transportation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...tenance of highways and roads. Third,it is difficult to walk on rugged roads in...
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... the road and my foot got dis-balanced. I got a fracture in my right leg and I lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, third, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88851351351 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80376708072 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493243243243 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4512538072 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3888888889 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370054128675 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120967927786 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12814107388 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219042424255 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107694459861 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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