Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things they don’t enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people have things that they really don’t like to do. I think we should get used to do these things because in life there would be a great deal of unusual situations where you probably couldn’t refuse to do this. This is a basic of our life. There are many things we have to do in both our personal and professional lives that we may not enjoy. In addition, sometimes by doing these things, we actually learn to like them.
We actually don’t know what will happen today or tomorrow. In life there will be a lot of situations where you would probably have to do this. Thus, we should accustom to do things that we don’t like to do. Who likes going to the doctor or dentist? Who likes changing the oil of a car? Who likes going for a walk with dog in winter or cold weather? Who likes to eat onion? We have to go to the doctor or dentist because we are probably ill. We have to change the oil of our car because we couldn’t get to work, or class. Anyway we do these things in many cases because we understand that we need to maintain our personal properties like health, car, dog and etc.
Similarly, our professional or student lives are filled with tasks that aren’t fun, but that are necessary part of our jobs. For example, I don’t like to write essays, but I have to write because this is a part of my future test for that I’m preparing now. There are many people with work that they really don’t enjoy but they do their work because this is a part of their professional responsibility and they earn money to satisfy needs of their family.
However, by doing these things repeatedly we find out that it’s very interesting and useful for us. In the course of time we understand that it’s inseparably part of our life and we like to do such things. For example, I didn’t like to eat carrot but after some time I liked to eat.
To sum, not everything in our life is fun. Some kind of job we like, some kind of job we don’t like. But we try to find the job which we more enjoy. If we are wrong don’t be upset. Not everything is lost. You can start over your life.
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...t but after some time I liked to eat. To sum, not everything in our life is fu...
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... is lost. You can start over your life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, but, however, if, may, really, similarly, so, thus, for example, i think, in addition, kind of, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38693467337 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48305791855 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427135678392 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0411182361 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6666666667 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7407407407 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7037037037 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22376173645 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772172709237 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795707893747 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156934479191 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679882438892 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.0 8.01818996416 75% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.