Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Generally speaking, as human beings, we believe that achieving paramount goals is one of the most essential things that we hold on to in our lives. Personally, I believe that reaching impossible goals makes people feel satisfied and happier. I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate my standpoint.
The first reason that makes me hold the belief is people need goals to have a passion for life. Needless to say, passion makes people feel happy and hopeful and gives them the meaning of life. In addition, studies by psychologists have shown that happiness and satisfied feelings could be paramount indications of productive people who are trying to achieve their impossible objectives. My example is a compelling illustration of this. I read once in a psychology magazine about a study held about the number of suicide in the United States. This study mentions about the majority of suicide cases constitute jobless people without any goals, which I believe they do not feel the aforementioned feelings. Moreover, the same study modeled a system to predict happiness indicator verse unproductive people, which it is showing as happiness decreases the less productive people are. It concluded that people should have their own goals to keep a happy and healthy life, because if they stop trying they would not have one.
Furthermore, some people believe that achieving their desired goals would make the world a better place to live. These goals could contribute and lead to new advancement and development of the human being. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. I work as an aerospace engineer in a research center. When I just joined the center I was holding a bachelor's degree in science, I had a difficult time contributing to the projects that we had. Two years later, after I did my Master's degree, I was nominated to supervise a project and I have contributed more than in the past. Thus, achieving my goal has led our center to be more productive.
In conclusion, people should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve in order to keep a healthy and happier life. Moreover, by achieving these goals we as human being we could make the world a better place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87301587302 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72804561183 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 378.0 20.1344086022 1877% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1842.0 100.406767564 1835% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 378.0 20.6045352989 1835% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 75.0 5.45110844103 1376% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243977091168 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.243977091168 0.076458572812 319% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171083256756 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905503294778 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 190.5 11.7677419355 1619% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -312.19 58.1214874552 -537% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 150.7 10.1575268817 1484% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.45 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.31 8.01818996416 316% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 10.002688172 570% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 153.2 10.0537634409 1524% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 191.0 10.247311828 1864% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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