Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most serious problems in the world will be solved during my lifetime. Use details and examples to support your answer.
There are many serious problems in the world, the solution for some of them takes short period of time and the other takes a long period of time. In addition, destruction is easy and quick, but building takes time to be done. In my opinion I think most of the serious problems will be solved after my lifetime. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, most people care for themself only and if they see opportunity that will make them rich, they will take it no matter what are the consequences for our planet. let's take global warming for example, as we all know that global warming accumulated over the years, and this is because industries do not care about the pollution, they make in order to manufacture more stuff to be richer, which results in an increase in the temperature.
Secondly, nowadays we use a lot of material that are not decomposable because it makes our life easier, and it is hard to force people to do something hard while they have thing that are easier to do. For instance, plastic is everywhere in our daily life since plastic take hundreds of years to decompose it will harm the world. We can see the ocean is full of plastic that harm the fish and destroy the marine environment.
To sum up, I strongly disagree with the statement that says problems of the world will be solved in my lifetime. This is because that people are selfish and want to be rich no matter the consequences. Second, we use material that are easy and cheap to buy which results in accumulated trash all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41666666667 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35075342532 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482638888889 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 288.0 20.1344086022 1430% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1272.0 100.406767564 1267% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 288.0 20.6045352989 1398% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 140.0 5.45110844103 2568% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252064130364 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252064130364 0.076458572812 330% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15886247118 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901208752809 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 143.4 11.7677419355 1219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -203.92 58.1214874552 -351% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 113.3 10.1575268817 1115% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.84 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.33 8.01818996416 254% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 10.002688172 520% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 117.2 10.0537634409 1166% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 10.247311828 507% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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