Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most serious problems in the world will be solved during my lifetime. Use details and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, the amount of time we need to solve the world problems has sparked an ongoing conversation, which leads to a moot question “Are we able to solve most of these problems in this generation lifetime?”. There is a widely held view that we are far far away from finding solution for even half the global problems, which I believe is wrong. The two main reasons that my opinion stems from are: the stunning speed of technologies advancement, and globalization.
According to the Global invention institute, we are living in a world that in each thirty minutes an invention comes out. After the advent of Internet with explosion of information, we are able to solve many of the problems which seemed impossible to be solved. For example, the new power plant installed in South Africa by Green Tech Inc can provide the energy for more than two million people using sustainable energy. Projects like this leads to a noticeable drop of famine in South Africa, and we are one step away from eradicating the world hunger problem.
Moreover, globalization enabled us to take actions in a size that was inconceivable before. Therefore, in this modern unified world, more countries take responsibilities. For example, China reduced its carbon footprint to half just in 5 years. Movements such this convinced the world leaders that it is possible to have zero carbon footprint by 2050.
To conclude, the data we have today suggests that utilizing new technologies and globalization make us able to solve large, complex, and time-consuming problems in scale. So, it seems we are able to see a world with a great degree of the problems solved in our lifetime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: far
...There is a widely held view that we are far far away from finding solution for even hal...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94623655914 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8994001078 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.672365211 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143436924353 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503294743601 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497785355268 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087839873184 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334515733514 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.