Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most serious problems in the world will be solved during my lifetime. Use details and examples to support your answer.
They say when having problems, it is critically important to accept them, deal with the fact that no life is lived with no sufferings and finally determine what types of problems encounter us in order to find a solution for them. I am of the opinion that the most critical problems cannot be solved in a lifetime. I FELL THIS WAY for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the climate change problem cannot be solved yet. As a matter of fact, human activities contributing to Greenhouse Gas effect are not finding any end. In contrast, these are tremendously increasing. My own experience as a chemical engineering student is a compelling illustration to this topic. For the past 5 years, I’ve been taking many environment-related courses. What I’ve learned is human activity, for example the burning of fossil fuels for power generation, transportation and domestic use such as heating, lighting, and so on and so forth, causes global warming. The latter leads to bigger amounts of GHG, resulting in serious climate change. Furthermore, the current state with few if any restrictions and responsible acts is not promising. Many areas are being classified as red spots with deadly toxic wastes. Consequently, as it can be seen, the situation is becoming worse day after day. This example points out that with no regulations, one of the biggest issues today is far from being solved.
Next, another critical problem is racism. As far as I’m concerned, the harm people are doing to others is drastically amplified nowadays. My personal experience showcases this idea. During five years, I’ve met many people with different nationalities, race, color, beliefs and religion and many were considered as strangers and treated so. In fact, THEY WERE mistreated and bullied because they are foreigners, or they are black, or they have a different religion that shows on their appearance like hijab. Not only this, but the wars and the hate occurring between people are taking place more and more because one country thinks she’s allowed to steal resources from other nation as if this people’s nation don’t deserve a prosperous life.
To sum up, it seems to me that most serious issues are no near to be solved in one lifetime. This is because climate change severeness is increasing rather than decreasing, coupled with the fact that people are becoming more arrogant and racists.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...f any restrictions and responsible acts is not promising. Many areas are being classified as red...
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Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...steal resources from other nation as if this people’s nation don’t deserve a prosper...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...eems to me that most serious issues are no near to be solved in one lifetime. This...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, so, for example, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05236907731 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81631272068 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593516209476 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7053607156 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0909090909 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2272727273 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179117506028 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515905458697 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480336166197 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108778508184 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373010564093 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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