Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents have the very important responsibility of shaping the lives of young, impressionable children. With this responsibility comes great pride and joy. With the tremendous change in the parents’ mentalities when parenting and raising kids alongside the huge impact Internet has, determining whether or not fathers are today’s youngs greatest teacher have become a very controversial topic of discussion. I am of the opinion that, no matter how society changes, parents are without any doubt the tutor, the leader and the mentor. This essay is going to discuss at least two reasons that explain the weight of parents in youngsters lives in order to explore more about these proper parenting styles, which could help to improve the child’s physical as well as cognitive aspects.
To begin with, kids tend to imitate their folks without a lot of thinking so they are vulnerable to any good habit their parents do. As a matter of fact, just like kids learn to talk, dress up, eat, and dance the way they do, they earn many values and learn behaviors directly from. My personal experience as a parent is a compelling illustration to this. For the past two years, my daughter Lara has been imitating me in everything I do, literally. She picks up any dress she likes, put on some makeup in a terrible way, wear my high heels in her small feet, and say the same words I say. As a result, I took advantage of this blind imitation and started acting accordingly, so I brush my teeth, make my bed and other house chores, exercise, eat healthy food and spend hours with no phone. Guess what, she keeps doing the same and I feel so proud because once she gets used to do such good stuff, she will keep doing this her entire life, hopefully!
Next, as kids are super attached to their parents and love them so much, they are obliged to well behave, have values and do HWs even if they don’t feel like doing them. For instance, two of the major parenting tasks are helping the kid with his Homeworks alongside teaching him some manners. As far as HW are concerned, after school parents aid their sons doing them correctly because they cannot do them alone. My own experience demonstrates this reality. When it comes to HW Lara do them with her dad. Although this is not something fun to do, and at the first beginning she nagged a lot, but many reasons forced her to accomplish them in a perfect way. For example, her love for her father, the fear of punishment, us being mad at her, and earning reward motivated her. Now, she gets it that each day two hours after school, she does her HW and then she gets her parents blessings. Moreover, I always tell her before bed story that has a value like honesty, respect, generosity, loving each other despite differences and so on and so on.
All parents should strive for what can be considered to be a "good parent." To sum up, it seems to me that parents play the major role in their child lives and I’m fortunate to feel this way. This is because kids act the way their parents do and they teach them school lessons and manners.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2541.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 550.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48829391583 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 212.727598566 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550909090909 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 764.1 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.812638364 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146129872122 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048767260279 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032823088767 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982810550132 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148678528495 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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