Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
The most important objective for many governments is economic growth, however, some people strongly believe that other criteria, such as healthcare and education, need improvement to the same extent as the economy. In my opinion, I consider that paying attention to all the aspects is really imperative to have a developed country.
On the one hand, there are governors who think the economy is the central infrastructure of the government and by which the country can be in a stable condition. Therefore, they put most of their efforts in developing the economic system. In other words, to have a healthy society, and to facilitate the development of every other factor, considering the economy as the highest priority is vital. For example, when the country has a sustainable financial system, people would have a decent job and consequently more purchasing power, hence, they can easily cover their basic needs as well as some subsequent needs like buying a house, or a car which eventually brings more happiness and life satisfaction for the society. Furthermore, children would have a stable upbringing and high-grade education.
On the other hand, it is sometimes thought that administrations ought to dedicate enough time and effort to all the fields, not just economy and I agree. The main reason supports the idea is that progression of economic value is not the only indicator of having a robust society. For example, not a very long time ago, countries were governed by tyrants and some of them had really successful economic achievements. But many people were deprived of their very essential necessities like social justice, healthcare, and education. Women had the minimum rights, slavery was widely prevalent, and most of the people were illiterate. Thus, as long as racism, inequality, and patriarchy are ruling a country, the economy cannot have a significant role to build a thriving community.
In conclusion, while this is still an ongoing debate, I think that having equity in all the levels of society is indispensable to reach a flourishing and stable country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95363047546 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568047337278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6389869201 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.357142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7857142857 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210054840008 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646325453516 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513066608963 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125349587362 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548669694607 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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