Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Most people think that they should spend their time and effort to obtain some goals that are practical. In fact, they do not give any change to many dreams. However, personally, I believe that we can achieve every goals that we think about them, even if they seem to be impossible. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, thanks to advances of technology, we have made a great deal of progress in human mental advancement, and as a result, we have achieved many unbelievable improvements such as improvements in industries, improving the quality of life, and increasing the health of our community's members. These achievements help us to understand the fact that we can do everything that we want better than ever before, and there is no limitation. My experience is a compelling illustration of this. I am living in a country where our governments have tried to improve the level of satisfactory of our people and had several plans for it. They necessarily need a lot of help to implement their plans and make their dreams come true. I have worked in a company where we seek to accelerate governments projects, and I have seen many ideas be implemented that at the first, seem to be impossible. Therefore, thanks to technology and all of our achievements, no goals is impossible now.
Furthermore, we must repeat this fact with ourselves that we should be hopeful and believe in ourselves to do whatever we tend to. Indeed, there is a possible solution in the deep point of every one of us. If we have a good tendency to do something, we will be successful in the end. For instance, newton was not overthinking that how it could be possible to find a solution for gravity. He just believed in himself that he found something precious. He actually found his best discovery, but he did not know anything about in before that. Therefore, believe is the most important thing that can help someone to do something, even if we consider that goal to be impossible.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that people can obtain whatever they want, regardless of how it could be hard to achieve. This is because we need to be hopeful and believe in ourselves, and we could do many impossible goals in the past, so we can do it again. I would therefore recommend it to other people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65450121655 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84502622128 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508515815085 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6012403823 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0952380952 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148422481145 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476303780289 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434810832475 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110719761203 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542772089383 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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