Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
it is very critical for a person to set a goal in its life and work hard to achieve it. In fact, it is important to do what is necessary to secure the goal. many probably give up their dreams which means it seems impossible to them. However, I personally believe that it is important to achieve the goals, even if they seems impossible to achieve. This is beacuse, it will improve the learning skills. Another reason is, it help to get command over the work.
To begin with, keep trying will help the person to improve their learning skills which means they always seek something new in the process. People should never give up as nothing is impossible for human and when they keep struggling for it, the result will always be fruitful. For instance, to get the admissions in the Masters programm at the University of florida, I need to Score 30/30 in English writing. As I was not the native speaker so it was very difficult and seems impossible for me. however, I try and keep on learning everytime I struggle with my writing it improved my skills, vocabulary and writing pattern. Finally, with lots of hard work I achieved my goal and got the admission. In all this journey, I learned many different things which were very helpful in my career.
In addition, keep on trying for securing the goal will help made the person expert in their work. To exemplify, a person whose expertise are in multimedia run a company for them working on financial report or calculating financial assets seems impossible for them. however, they have to do in order to keep the check on profit and loss for the company. it they keep on working and put their efforts over it, take an expertise advise and help would be beneficial .Their working skill will be improved and get more expertise over their work.
In conclusion, I agree that a person should never stop from trying keep up to achieve their goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61538461538 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45813658875 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491124260355 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.053287037 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236133370071 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823151808401 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551697003548 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16961365313 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242866254624 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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