Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “A person should never make an important decision alone”. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people think that you should never make a vital decision alone while others think that it’s better to make a decision alone after a long consideration. Personally speaking, I believe that people should come to an important decision very carefully because a wrong step could change your life to a bad way and then you would regret it later. Therefore you need other people to help you do this like friends, people with particular knowledge, and family members.
First of all, taking friend’s advice on a situation is very helpful because friends never give a bad advice. Moreover, on the contrary they can be supportive, reliable to each other when they face some difficulties in life and get upset. I will give you an example of my own experience. I have a friend and two years ago we were the members of the college’s soccer team. Our team was participating in a very big and important competition among other college teams. We demonstrated ourselves very well on the tournament and reached the final. But in the final match we lost to our opponents by a goal. I was so upset and frustrated with this losing that I decided to give up playing football and leave my team. However, my best friend came to the rescue, supported me and convinced me not to leave the team. He consoled me and said that it wasn’t the end of the world, we would participate in other competitions and we could win more important contests and I should move on and let it go. After these supportive words I decided to stay with team.
Second, people with particular knowledge like counselors and teachers are also can help you to handle your problem. When I was at college, I had to decide which major to choose. I talked to the college counselor who has certain knowledge and expertise to figure out which major is suitable for me. We had a productive conversation about my future, my interests, my past, and my hobbies and then conducted several psychological tests and determined my interests like desire to math. Then he suggested me to major in accounting. This counseling was my first experience and I’m happy that I overcome these difficulties in deciding my major.
Finally, taking an advice from parents and older brothers is also a great idea because he/she lived much longer than you and has particular life experience. Several months ago I was thinking about studying overseas and I needed some information about it because I was unsure about my thoughts. So I asked my older brother who has been studying in the US for 4 years about it. He shared his experience with me, told me the pros and cons of studying abroad, and requirements to study abroad. After hearing his experiences, I decided it would be a great experience for me too. Now I’m studying really hard to get higher points on my test and achieve my goals.
All in all, when you are faced with an important decision, you should ask your friends, family members, and people with particular knowledge for help and advice because they can support you, direct to a right direction, and share their experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 43.0788530466 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 537.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76163873371 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73828512473 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497206703911 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 809.1 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7883709187 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7037037037 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207808751863 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542017427165 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647037079203 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136183034347 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933910826037 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.