franchise
The author describes the advantages of buying a franchise for people who want to start their new business. However, the speaker states that it is not a good idea to have a franchise and describes the disadvantages.
The author says that it’s a great opportunity for people who want to open their business for the first time because of three reasons. First, if you are a franchising owner you are saved from serious losses because most franchise companies provide reliable and dependable suppliers. Moreover, you can save a lot of money on advertising because you will sell an already popular, recognized, and well-advertised by parent company products. Finally, franchise provides an inexperienced business owners more security than independent businesses which have a very high failure rate.
The speaker opposes these points made by author by giving next reasons. First, a franchise company forces the franchise owner to buy a very specific products and services which makes the franchise owners dependent on parent company. Second, the franchise owners have to pay 6% of their sales which is very high tariff for them. Also the parent company advertises only its products not franchise owner’s business which contributes to a little benefit. And finally, franchising may be less risky for first-time business owner but it is not secure. But there is another option for people who want to start their new business, they can buy an already independent business which can be less risky and more secure option for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The author describes the advantages of b...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hise and describes the disadvantages. The author says that it's a great o...
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Line 2, column 500, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'owner'?
Suggestion: owner
...hise provides an inexperienced business owners more security than independent business...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which have a very high failure rate. The speaker opposes these points made by...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...les which is very high tariff for them. Also the parent company advertises only its ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21457489879 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79878633286 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522267206478 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5944575591 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337035243431 0.272083759551 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165833464933 0.0996497079465 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139377819669 0.0662205650399 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268666468403 0.162205337803 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500882465528 0.0443174109184 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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