Some people believe that success comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are a lot of controversies over this issue whether risk-takers are more successful or planners. Some people say that the key to success is the ability to take risks while others believe that a thorough plan play a crucial role in success. In my opinion, risk-takers are more successful because they do not waste time to make a plan, they can learn from mistakes, and they do not think too much on devising a course of action.
First of all, devising a plan or a course of action is a very long process because you have to take into account every single detail. But by doing so you can miss a potentially lucrative and prospective opportunity to succeed because when there is such a chance which requires taking a prompt and strong step ahead you seek to make a plan, and “bang”, you just missed your train. My uncle’s experience can be a good example of this. He was an accountant in a large multi-national company with a huge salary, but one day he received a job offer from another company for Head of Accountants. However, my uncle declined this offer because it was too much responsibility for him. So, here he failed to take a risk and a great chance to be successful.
Secondly, risk-takers are usually successful because they are not afraid of failures. They just risk and if they fail they learn their lesson and move on. Take another opportunity, if failure again, learn and move on. That is their system. These failures and lessons from mistakes are lifelong experiences which are essential and priceless in life which could lead them to success one day. However, the planners are detail-oriented people and they always think about consequences of their steps, of each detail, and afraid of failure, and therefore most of the time they fail.
Last, but certainly not least, planners usually tend to be under depression and stress which is harmful for health. They always try not to miss any tiny detail and try to speculate the future unexpected events and ramifications of their steps and action which could lead to failure, therefore they spend a lot of sleepless nights contemplating about such things which leads to stress and depression. While risk-takers are less vulnerable to depression and stress because they do not think about implications of their actions.
When all is said and done, risk-takers succeed more than planners because they learn from old mistakes, do not miss an opportunity, and do not think too much about their actions and its consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83644859813 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7501260502 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495327102804 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7512851713 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.947368421 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178295845793 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600563460915 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715038355622 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107765325887 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094302154932 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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