Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
"Two roads diverged in the wood, and I; I took the one less traveled by" - Robert Frost.
Careful planning includes a way that leads to a safe and secure destination, be it one's personal or professional life. Yet to a handful of individuals, the definition of success is not just about being stable. They consider that sky's the limit, and one should take all chances in one's only lifetime to achieve it. I firmly believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. In what follows, I'll note down a few points to explain the reasons behind my stand for the notion.
To begin with, I believe that it's difficult to succeed when played safely. No matter whether the opportunity falls into your plan or not, it's always wise to grab it when it comes your way. Let's take the example of one of the most famous risk-takers ever, Mr. Bill Gates. To give his vision a reality, he dropped out of college. Hardly he had any resources but a garage and a set of computers, did he start his own company, believing one fine day, every business and almost all households will require computers daily.
Secondly, a person who is willing to take risks or is under the process can easily overcome the fear of uncertainty. Hardly anyone can predict the future. One who's capable of accepting any surprises that the future has to bring has better chances to remain unbent and unbroken in the race of cut-throat competition. For instance, it would be only justifiable to mention our generation's most daring risk-taker, Elon Musk. He had been highly criticized for playing Russian roulette in financing both his failing companies, SpaceEx and Tesla. Yet, he took the risk, and eventually, these companies ended up making a handsome profit.
Last but not least, unlike a certain group of people who believe that failure is opposite to success; in my opinion, failure is rather a part of success. Taking risks may result in several failures. But one who learns from each one can stand back up even stronger. Let us understand this using an example. This man lost eight elections, failed twice in business and suffered a nervous breakdown before he became the greatest president America ever had. Yes, I'm talking about the 16th American President, Abraham Lincoln.
To conclude, there's no doubt that planning is an excellent way to start proceeding with a vision. But at the same time, one should not be too stubborn to let opportunities go out of the window just because they were unexpected and hence never put into the plan before. Taking risks makes one resilient, making them stand tall in the ever-changing world of technology, economy, and creativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, no doubt, talking about, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84429824561 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59719812329 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627192982456 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1807373273 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9615384615 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23531933794 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588273695785 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939770036767 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104654286692 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890233536877 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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