Success comes in many different ways. Some say that risks must be taken in order to succeed in life, while others say that planning things carefully and "playing it safe" leads to success. I personally believe that although planning every single scenario isn't possible due to randomness of life, one must have a general plan of which steps to take in order to succeed on their path. This essay will try to shed light on my opinion with several examples and reasons.
The first thing that should be mentioned is that by making a plan, we can track our progress. Furthermore, having a plan not only lets us see our progress, but it also makes us try harder to advance further in our path, making us immerse ourselves into what we are supposed to do, and increasing our chances of succeeding in life. This isn't always the case with people that merely rely on luck by making risky choices that have unclear outcomes. To give an example from my life, almost a decade ago, I started studying for SBS (an exam that sorts Turkish students into high schools) almost a year before my friends and made a monthly plan of which subjects to study. Following this plan motivated me as I could see the progress that I had made every month, which led me to succeed and get a high score on the exam.
Secondly, a person might miss several opportunities by not taking any risks, but having a plan and following it is always a good idea. In my opinion, life resembles a path at night. And a plan is like a bright candle that lets one see what is ahead of them and what steps they should take, preventing them from falling by stepping on a rock and allowing them to walk their way to success. Life is no gamble and one should have a candle when walking on this path. Several researches support this opinion of mine. According to a social experiment that took place in 2009, people that follow a plan are much more efficient when it comes to pursuing their goals.
In conclusion, despite the fact that careful planning is not the only way to succeed in life, there are a lot of reasons to think that it is the most foolproof way, as having a well-thought-out plan and following it can let people overcome certain obstacles and help them work towards their goal in an efficient way. Therefore, it is of great importance for people to make a plan before they start pursuing their dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56844547564 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43607335903 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522041763341 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.39644111 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.823529412 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3529411765 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152252471323 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533429997445 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485584180044 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990466645835 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598449816092 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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