The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization.
The prototype of the internet was created in the 1960s where multiple computers were made to communicate with each other with the help of packet switching technology. Who knew that a technology invented for solely military purposes and communication by scientists would one day become one of the most household things. With this note, I mention that I do not agree with the statement that the invention of the internet has had negative effects on our civilization and list down the points that explain my take against the notion.
To begin with, the internet has given us the privilege of gathering knowledge from all over the world that was initially restricted to our textbooks only. Students can now access e-books at affordable prices, watch video tutorials if they've missed their classroom lectures, can seek help from online tutors, and many more. Imagine a world without internet during the Covid-19 pandemic. Students could have lost one vital year of their academic life, but instead, with the help of the internet, they could continue their regular classes and examinations online.
Secondly, the business can never have been so globalized that it is today with the help of the internet. One can sell and purchase products in the comfort of one's home, online. Let' take an example where marketing of products was only limited to billboards, TV commercials, or sales campaign once. But today the internet with the help of data analytics has paved a way for every online user to get recommendations of products based on their previous selection, over any online site they surf. Not only it has uplifted user experience but has positively influenced online sales.
Last but not least, with the advent of the internet, it has opened a new world of job opportunities for us. Starting from a programmer to a blogger or a fellow in the digital marketing section, the internet has become a mode of livelihood for a major section of our population. Being a software engineer and working as a web developer, I can share my personal experience here. Had it not been the internet, I would have still wondered my way through life. Also, companies working with information technology are involved in hiring millions of freshers every year, providing them a kick-start to their career, all because of the reason that the internet exists.
I cannot deny the fact that all these virtues of the internet come at a certain cost. The internet has helped us to deposit, withdraw, and transfer money from anywhere to everywhere, yet at the same time, it has created risks of being hacked by fraudulent users. But nonetheless, the invention of the internet has been one of the best contributions of technology so far.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...and purchase products in the comfort of ones home, online. Let take an example where...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96923076923 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73440512365 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545054945055 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2255340694 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.05 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203027913003 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593850185535 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707359496728 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113821901214 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674314632279 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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