in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today
Some people think that after 20 years we will use fewer cars than nowadays while others think that much more cars will be in use in future. Personally speaking, I think that there will be more cars in use than today. In my essay I will discuss some reasons for rising the number of cars in future such as the expansion of car industry all over the world, cars are part of our lives, and prospects of future cars.
First of all, we are watching the rapid expansion of car industry and also at the same time, an increasing demand for cars among people all over the world. Moreover, there is a huge growth in human population which means that much more people would like to have cars than ever wanted, because the cars have made our lives much more comfortable and flexible. For example, many people use cars to get to work, to get their children to school, to go shopping, to travel, and so on. So that motivates the car industries to produce much more vehicle and vary their types in order to be in peoples demands.
Secondly, we definitely cannot imagine our lives without cars because cars have become intrinsic part our lives. We need them everywhere and any kind of industry demands cars to deliver something, to transport somebody to another place, to help in emergency and so on. For example, we use the vehicles in factories to bring ingredients of producing, in restaurant business to deliver pizza, in public transportation such as taxis and buses, to help in emergency situations like police, firefighters, heart attack and others.
Finally, despite the cars pollute our planet and need gas which causes depleting our fossil fuels like petroleum scientists have made major breakthrough in inventing new kind of fuel, which don’t pollute our environment, called electric power which can substitute gas. Of course, this is a raw project which needs to be enhanced but we are so near to solve the air pollution by cars. I can assume that in the near future we could be able to see or even drive cars running on electric power which increases the possibility of rising the number of cars in future without any damage to our planet.
To sum up, I conclude that in future we will use more cars for the reasons such as rise in demands for cars and development of car industry, cars are intrinsic part of our lives, and the possibility of damage less cars to our environment in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in fact, kind of, of course, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66037735849 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49083403361 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47641509434 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0093385899 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.142857143 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 5.45110844103 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314740410687 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136878399792 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137633586552 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198268683664 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150495633719 0.0645574589148 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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