Everyday people encounter a lot of obstacles, and they have to give decisions regarding this problems.Thus, there have been always debates concerning whether humans have to decide themselves or not. From my perspective, when someone gives you particular advice, you get broader view about that topic. I hold this opinion for main reasons, which i will explore in my following essay.
First of all, i would like to elucidate they claim i made above deeper, in order to convey my opinions in a most precise way. According to scientific research, it has been evident that when people fall into challenging situation, their brains do not function effective comparing to their normal state, and in addition to it, they also get nervous which may engender flawed decision.Thus, when there is a person who also clarifies his or her idea, you do not have severe problem like i mentioned above.
Secondly, when someone is coming to conclusion alone, there is tremendous possibility of him or her to hurry up, and have disappointing result.Therefore, when there is someone near you, you keep calm and probably you are not going to end up seeing awful result.
Thirdly, and perhaps the main point that have to be deemed here is the productivity of people when there are working together. It has been scientifically proven that in fact when people brainstorm they are more productive, so it will lead to more convenient consequences.
In conclusion, i would like to assert that life is full of substantial choices or decisions, and your future is based on that, so you have to be prudent and wise while you are dealing with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9197080292 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86987583881 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.155034278 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.777777778 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.45110844103 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809898792668 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320334944294 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284721636797 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463743388822 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271699666668 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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