Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Making decision is very crucial part of life and it is hard because sometimes a small decision could affect one’s life. To conclude in a word, every decision has one impact to life. That’s why it so venturous, and some people afraid to make a decision alone. However, I am totally disagreeing with the idea that a person should never make an important decision alone.
First of all, while you make a decision the results and consequences of it will affect more than others to you that is why all decisions that connect with your life, you have to make yourself. It appears to us that every moment we can do it, but it goes without saying that you have to have a clear The, your nervous system has to be quiet and you have to think pros and cons of it. No one has a right to submerge to your life and change your plans and the way of your living. Don’t forget that no one can love you more than yourself.
Secondly, if you in the nick of time and you haven’t decided what to do, then go and ask some advice from experienced people, because they are have confronted with challenges more than you and they have broke barriers more than you. They experience will assist you to break barriers, but at the end, you have to choose one of the ways without asking someone about it.
In conclusion, it is the best way to take advice and make decisions alone. If the results became vice versa, any way you will drive a lesson. Bad decisions make great stories, don’t forget it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Did you forget something after 'The'?
...ut saying that you have to have a clear The, your nervous system has to be quiet and...
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Line 6, column 149, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...om experienced people, because they are have confronted with challenges more than yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35467953286 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7038397623 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7692307692 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268876852866 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110306215369 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958019389156 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166711678303 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622493905726 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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