Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Practice and hardwork are more important to an athlete’s success than natural ability and talent. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
some people in the world believe that legendary athletes born with God gifted talent and natural abilities which extraordinary as compared to other people in world and hard work is just associated with this gift. However, I disagree with those people because I think the only thing make an athlete a legend is his/her hard work. I explore my views on this topic in subsequent paragraph.
First, I think practice and hard work is more important because it’s never going to waste as well as it increases your skill day by day in little amount. For example, the world-famous athlete usain bolt was not born with natural ability to run fast and complete the 100 meters in 9 seconds. before he created that record in that olympics, he failed in previous one, but he never stopped there he continued his practice and hard work which take much more time. Now some people try to convince that the legs of usain bolt maybe have some kind of energy that make it possible for him. but it is true? No, because most of us not there when he completed thousand of round before final one.
second, I believe in practice and hard work so much because doing it, make anyone to achieve anything. For instance, American swimmer, Michael Phelps did something in olympics that not just an athlete even though a country also thinks would be possible to do. he won 8 gold medals in 2016 olympics and total 28 gold medal in his overall olympics career. The thing makes him special that there so many countries in the world who not even won total 28 gold medal in all their format like India. The question rises again that does he have supernatural abilities? The answer is no, because he practiced swimming from his childhood and after having car accident doctor recommends him to not swim again, but he did not listen and practiced 20 hours day before one year of olympics and again won gold medals. As a result, you can manage anything with practice and hard work.
Lastly, I think practice and hard work matter most because it helps you to work on weakness and increase your stamina in that field. practice makes you unmistakable and hard work make you strong like stone. For example, the greatest of all time Mohammad Ali never liked his practice and never love his practice, but he knew that one day it makes me successful. so, he never missed his practice not a single day. Moreover, not all practitioners are legends, but all legends were practitioners.
so, to sum up, maybe there were some athletes had natural ability made them to done something unique which impossible for normal people. Still, I believe that practice and hard work is more important to an athlete.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, so, still, well, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result, as well as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69296375267 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36203647635 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5288650507 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6956521739 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3913043478 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.39130434783 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169609070038 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542175527755 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470372079394 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111204753573 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270734605867 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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