TPO 12 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that people should masterate in a particular subject which helps them to get a good job. However, I firmly believe that people should try to learn different types of subjects and I have three reasons which support my idea. I will explain and develop this idea in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, people need to get knowledge from different subjects because, in this modern world, there is high demand for that people. people who have known more than their specific field, get jobs that pay very high. Drawing from my own experience, my brother graduated in economics and later did his MBA from a good university and also get an optional psychology degree from the same university, now he working as a manager in a reputed international foundation. when people just get one type of knowledge they just risk their future with that decision and have low chances of high-paying jobs.
Secondly, it is important to get a broader knowledge because, if you get stuck in any different type of condition that you don't familiar with, you can at least make sure that you do not do any wrong which harms you. For example, when you get the basic knowledge about electricity and how it works you will be able to do the things like changing the light bulbs and turning on the AC or many basic things. so there are fewer possibilities of injury.
Last but not least, when you have all kinds of information inside you feel more confident than the person who has just particular information. For instance, the difference between the man who gets a math degree in college and just knows how to solve math and the other man who also has a math degree and also has communication skills. At the time when they face each other in any competition or in interview chances of getting the win of a man who has communication skill is high. As a result, having broader knowledge is always good.
To conclude, this matter is complex to analyze still in light reason mentioned I strongly believe that it is better to have a broader knowledge of many academic subjects than a specific one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, at least, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56117204334 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533875338753 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5170820264 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215320581186 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076536690371 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776635837708 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140345236739 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883940102158 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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